Thursday, August 16, 2012

Narratives

One bright sunny day a little boy called Jack went wondering in the forest when he bumped into a giant beanstalk. He decided to climb the beanstalk in curiosity. To his surprise there was an enormous gigantic giant waiting for him. The giant wanted to eat the tiny boy so Jack sprinted into the giants house. He saw a huge open window so he leaped out. The giant didn't know were the mischievous Jack went. So after the giant had fallen asleep Jack crept back into the giants house. Jack was wondering what the dumb giant would do next. All the giant did was fall back asleep and dribble. Jack was cracking up laughing he didn't realise that he had just awoke the giant! The giant saw Jack and tried to leap on him but Jack was far to fast for the giant. Jack leaped down the beanstalk to safety. The giant was only sleep walking!! The giant fell to the ground snoring and sucking his thumb."Baby!" Jack said as he chopped the beanstalk down and the giant died.


By Ashleigh

3 comments:

  1. I love my comment and Amy said that it is quite amazing. It was so exiting when I put my first post on the blog.


    By Ashleigh and Amy

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  2. I think Jacob and Shakira did a good job at conducting the orchestra.
    I really liked the bit when Jacob made them go high and quick then all of a sudden he stopped them instantly!!!

    Mrs J, what did you think of the orchestra?

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  3. I loved doing that story it was about three pages in my book. It took me two pages to write it. I didn't know when I started writing it that it would be published!!!!! It was a real surprise I thought it would just stay in my book or just read it to the class

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